Holiday Week 2

Holiday Week 2

Monday 4th and Thursday 7th April 2016

Below are two photos of my second draft of my brochure where I had taken the critique from the last one and improved it as much as I could.

There is distance problem between the title and the sub-title, so moving the sub-title up would fix it easily. There are no keys present here, so that will need working on. The layout and the image page are both sparse and a lot too basic and will need working on. The watering can it too far removed from the whole idea of the Farmer's Market and therefore it is hard for the viewer to make that connection. To remedy this, the drawn image will have to change to something that is more easily associated with the Farmer's Market. 

The secondary arts and culture heading will need to be bold to match the rest of the booklet, as well as the headings in the list text. Taking out the bullet points will allow for more room and make the list text look less cramped. The photo of the coloured flags doesn't really relate to the idea of markets and therefore will be needed to be changed to a image, which has people browsing stalls. 

I took these critiques and worked on the designs to make them better for the next critique.