Week 5
Monday 11th and Thursday 14th April 2016
Below are two of photos of my third draft of my brochure where I had taken the critique from the last one and improved it as much as I could.
Both the tomato and the spade are about the same size and are just in the middle of the page. This means either one could get enlarged by quite a bit; or a image could be inserted behind and the tomato turned into two or more connected by a vine stems.
The main body text is just one big boring block of text and needs to be broken up into paragraphs. Also the text of both the main body and the list text is too big and needs to go down a size or two.
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